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Jk_Sl

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2020Syd2020

Senior Member
Hello,

I think there is a sense of joy about this piece that is really infectious. For me there are one or two language choices that I disagree with, I think whence for instance feels a little archaic and old-fashioned in comparison with the rest of the piece. I would also probably remove baby, because the way it’s used and the context of it makes me think Austin Powers.

Cheers

Syd
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Hello,

I think there is a sense of joy about this piece that is really infectious. For me there are one or two language choices that I disagree with, I think whence for instance feels a little archaic and old-fashioned in comparison with the rest of the piece. I would also probably remove baby, because the way it’s used and the context of it makes me think Austin Powers.

Cheers

Syd

That’s actually quite funny Austin power’s [emoji23]
For that reason I think I’ll keep it [emoji108][emoji108][emoji91][emoji91]
Thank You very much.
 
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