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Who are you... (1 Viewer)

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
I often wonder who you are
when you’re not killing me ....


She looked in the mirror
and said I break my own
heart every night.


I made this with another writer.

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TheMightyAz

Mentor
I would highly recommend to consider your other two poems, add this in and then work through all three to form one great poem.
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
I would highly recommend to consider your other two poems, add this in and then work through all three to form one great poem.

Hi,

Thank you I’ve only just noticed your reply.
This was made with another writer.
I will take your advice on board , thank you.

J.
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
I would highly recommend to consider your other two poems, add this in and then work through all three to form one great poem.

Hi,

I’d had another thought earlier.
When this poem was made, the bottom half was actually a comment to the writer’s poem.
It felt so personal and every time I read it back it has a deeper meaning.
I think I will keep it as it is, I had thought she meant who are you is her partner , but my comment made it that she was talking about herself.

J.
 
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