This is a bit of an odd one. Normally I don't have much trouble with things like this but I can't get my head around where the commas should go, if any. Don't say 'cut', just tell me where the commas should go
I fingered the brim of my battered black fedora, the frayed curves, the cream trim, a £4.50 Saturday matinee Odeon cinema ticket tucked behind; a bookmark for credentials yet to be printed. I figured it didn’t really matter right now. The look is what mattered, and it looked cool. Really cool.