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Burning
This is my first ever script. I always wanted to write one. Its a comedy, please comment.
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Whats His Problem?
Act 1 Scene 1
[John, Pat sit in the living room, watching television, staring at the television. Pat sits on the armchair, uncomfortablely with his arms crossed]
Pat: Is this what we are going to do all day?
John: Well if you would have brung your Playstation around, maybe you would be having fun, but you didn’t.
[John huffs as Pat sighs]
Pat: Just because I didn’t bring it around doesn’t mean we cant have fun.
[John mumbles]
Pat: How about we go to the arcade down the street, I’ll even pay.
John: Yeah but get a taxi.
Pat: Why? It only in the next street.
John: If we don’t get a taxi, then im not going, Im not bored you know.
Pat: Your watching the news. You always complain about it.
John: So.
[John lifts a beer and necks it. Sits back down and burps loudly.]
Pat: Im away, whats the point of me sittin…
[Interupts]
John: Bye, shut the door on the way out.
[Pat mumbles and slams the door]
John: I hate the news.
[Gets off the chair, stretches, cracks his back, puts a coat on and walks out, locking the door behind him]
[Walks down the road and into the shop, lifts a coke and goes to till, sees Pat in front of him]
John: O hello Pat
Pat: Where you going?
John: Just thought I might take a nip down to the arcade for a bit, heard there was new games.
[Pat runs past John furiously and out of the shop]
Shop Assistant: Whats his problem?
John: Doesn’t like arcades.
[Pays for drink, and walks out whistling to the arcade, seeing Pat storm off in his car. John waves]
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Whats His Problem?
Act 1 Scene 1
[John, Pat sit in the living room, watching television, staring at the television. Pat sits on the armchair, uncomfortablely with his arms crossed]
Pat: Is this what we are going to do all day?
John: Well if you would have brung your Playstation around, maybe you would be having fun, but you didn’t.
[John huffs as Pat sighs]
Pat: Just because I didn’t bring it around doesn’t mean we cant have fun.
[John mumbles]
Pat: How about we go to the arcade down the street, I’ll even pay.
John: Yeah but get a taxi.
Pat: Why? It only in the next street.
John: If we don’t get a taxi, then im not going, Im not bored you know.
Pat: Your watching the news. You always complain about it.
John: So.
[John lifts a beer and necks it. Sits back down and burps loudly.]
Pat: Im away, whats the point of me sittin…
[Interupts]
John: Bye, shut the door on the way out.
[Pat mumbles and slams the door]
John: I hate the news.
[Gets off the chair, stretches, cracks his back, puts a coat on and walks out, locking the door behind him]
[Walks down the road and into the shop, lifts a coke and goes to till, sees Pat in front of him]
John: O hello Pat
Pat: Where you going?
John: Just thought I might take a nip down to the arcade for a bit, heard there was new games.
[Pat runs past John furiously and out of the shop]
Shop Assistant: Whats his problem?
John: Doesn’t like arcades.
[Pays for drink, and walks out whistling to the arcade, seeing Pat storm off in his car. John waves]