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Vagabond Boy (1 Viewer)

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Vagabond boy
Vagabundus guy
All his life spent
Wondering why

Many years
Many years

Spent wondering why
Took away from
Familiar faces
To alien spaces
Boy become guy
Left wondering why

Don’t leave us they said
I’ll be back I said

The years passed by
Still wondering why
Friends were family
Always a tear in his eye

We’ll miss you they said
I’ll be back I said

Why must you cry
Poor vagabundus guy
Because I’m still left
Wondering why

For my dear friends
I left behind
I love you guys

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J.h
 
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Vagabond boy
Vagabundus guy
All his life spent
Wondering why

Many years
Many years

Spent wondering why
Took away from
Familiar faces
To alien spaces
Boy become guy
Left wondering why

Don’t leave us they said
I’ll be back I said

The years passed by
Still wondering why
Friends were family
Always a tear in his eye

We’ll miss you they said
I’ll be back I said

Why must you cry
Poor vagabundus guy
Because I’m still left
Wondering why

For my dear friends
I left behind
I love you guys

232e0c373d2aefb1dcab6e410b09a364.jpg


b4351c7f93b138ffa159135be389e72f.jpg



J.h

Hi J.,

I see you're exploring other topics.
For some, friends are the best family...that's no small thing.
...continue exploring and journeying...in your writing too. This is a great start.

The words on the second picture...is that a part of the poem? I like the line..."the world awaits a soul like yours". It encourages one to push through...

Thanks for sharing.
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Thank you very much,
It was just a thought in his head after the first message he had from leaving his childhood friends.
Thank you for your kindness.

J.h
 
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