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Jk_Sl

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2020Syd2020

Senior Member
Hello,

This is a bold piece, for me going with something so minimal in terms of content I think you need to play with the structure and how it appears on the page a little more to really have impact. Whether that’s with font size, how the words appear on the page or something more out there, perhaps a wheel? I just think you need to do more.

I admire the bravery of this piece

Thank you

Syd
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Hello,

This is a bold piece, for me going with something so minimal in terms of content I think you need to play with the structure and how it appears on the page a little more to really have impact. Whether that’s with font size, how the words appear on the page or something more out there, perhaps a wheel? I just think you need to do more.

I admire the bravery of this piece

Thank you

Syd

Hi Syd I had something up that I thought upset people so I took it down, I’ll put it back up.
Thank You.
 
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