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Time And Me (1 Viewer)

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
Time in me
is flowing like a free flowing river.
Glacier was the seed
And sea will be the oldest never dying tree.

Me in time
has collected pebbles of my share
will sprinkle them here and there
in different pathways
in different zones.
Silt is my love
and greenery around
Is embracing it with all warmth and care

Combo of me and time
is an unknown truth.
But certainly a truth
that we both together were just drops,
drops of million moments
but not any destination.
We both together were milestones of the purpose.
At which moment we together achieved that
I really don't know

Ritu
 

happy-hippie

Senior Member
Time in me
is flowing like a free flowing river.
Glacier was the seed
And sea will be the oldest never dying tree.

Me in time
has collected pebbles of my share
will sprinkle them here and there
in different pathways
in different zones.
Silt is my love
and greenery around
Is embracing it with all warmth and care

Combo of me and time
is an unknown truth.
But certainly a truth
that we both together were just drops,
drops of million moments
but not any destination.
We both together were milestones of the purpose.
At which moment we together achieved that
I really don't know

Ritu

This is so pretty Ritu! I love it. I can't really put into words what it means(I'm not sure) but it just draws me in. Beautifu!!

Stanza 1 = the sea?
Stanza 2 = have collected my share of pebbles?
 

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
This is so pretty Ritu! I love it. I can't really put into words what it means(I'm not sure) but it just draws me in. Beautifu!!

Stanza 1 = the sea?
Stanza 2 = have collected my share of pebbles?

Hi Happy

Glacier and sea are the starting and end point as life and death. Sea is immortal as soul, it regenerates life. Pebbles are my contributions to life ( as mega flora, fauna and everything or just spreading liveliness) in different zones of the time.

The poem is not that ready but I felt like sharing here.
 

happy-hippie

Senior Member
Hi Happy

Glacier and sea are the starting and end point as life and death. Sea is immortal as soul, it regenerates life. Pebbles are my contributions to life ( as mega flora, fauna and everything or just spreading liveliness) in different zones of the time.

The poem is not that ready but I felt like sharing here.
Thanks for explaining. i just love how it reads.
 
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