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Those Few Books Under My Read (1 Viewer)

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
When I think of my existence so far,
Just think of my journey inside me,
and certain pinned ones, are still stuck in mind.
Out of too many I came across,
actually those define me,
the lanes of memory I visit again and again,
comprising me of my said, unsaid,
and those few books under my read.

Ritu
 
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2020Syd2020

Senior Member
Hello,

I like the story, like a lot of your work you invite the reader into the speaker’s journey you give them a real sense of the writer’s perspective. For me I’m struggling with the title and the last line. I get what you’re trying to say by it, but I don’t think it works as a sentence.

Cheers

Syd
 

Annie. Marie

Senior Member
I absolutely LOVE this piece. My favorite of yours thus far. This actually inspired me on a new one of my own, so thank you for that.
No edits!
Continue on. Excellent.

-Annie
 

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
Hello,

I like the story, like a lot of your work you invite the reader into the speaker’s journey you give them a real sense of the writer’s perspective. For me I’m struggling with the title and the last line. I get what you’re trying to say by it, but I don’t think it works as a sentence.

Cheers

Syd

I will have a look on it again.

Thanks Syd
 
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