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The Guitar (1 Viewer)

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
That's true, when sounds of ego and self proud overpowers our inner sound, volume of inner sound gets muted, and the real rhythm and music of the life stops..... Strings break and guitar becomes paralytic.

Lovely poem
 
That's true, when sounds of ego and self proud overpowers our inner sound, volume of inner sound gets muted, and the real rhythm and music of the life stops..... Strings break and guitar becomes paralytic.

Lovely poem

Hey Ritu,

I was trying something new...I love your insightful interpretation. I was trying to show how one can destroy who or what they claim to love when they are guided by their own wants, refuse to listen to feedback, and don't pay attention to how what they are doing affects others.

As always, thanks for taking the time to read and respond.
 

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
Hey Ritu,

I was trying something new...I love your insightful interpretation. I was trying to show how one can destroy who or what they claim to love when they are guided by their own wants, refuse to listen to feedback, and don't pay attention to how what they are doing affects others.

As always, thanks for taking the time to read and respond.

Hey Happy. I am liking your version more. It seems more relatable.
 

rcallaci

Staff member
Administrator
this is an outstanding poem-- a progression of mans' descent into darkness -- he couldn't hold on to the light and let the darkness consume him-- this poem totally resonated in me, it lingered on after I read it which for me is a jewel of a well crafted poem..brava


warmest
bob
 
this is an outstanding poem-- a progression of mans' descent into darkness -- he couldn't hold on to the light and let the darkness consume him-- this poem totally resonated in me, it lingered on after I read it which for me is a jewel of a well crafted poem..brava


warmest
bob

Thank you so much! It's such a nice feeling to know that something I wrote resonates with someone. I so appreciate your taking the time to read and share how the poem affected you. It means a lot.
 
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