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The Ghost (1) (A translated story) (1 Viewer)

Harper J. Cole

Creative Area Specialist (Speculative Fiction)
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Nice work; the translation was a bit awkward in places, but I could still follow the story with no trouble.

The interactions with the mysterious ghost are well done. I look forward to reading more! :thumbr:
 

hypocritter

Senior Member
I really enjoyed the balance between internal dialog and actual conversation. Also, much of the descriptive writing had a poetic feel which I also enjoyed. As for constructive criticism, I'm sure there's much to say but as a beginner I'll leave that to somebody better qualified for now.
Keep creating fella.
 

Gillmanjoe

Senior Member
this was nice, it kept my interest. some reason, not sure why, but it had a Chinese vibe to it even though it was translated.
 

xiaoman

Senior Member
Thank you all! I apologize for removing the post, because I am looking forward to publishing it.


recently I took part in translating a book written by an American Chinese author Minglu Zeng, and it has come out. All of the stories in this book have received awards and one of them was make a short film:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y4rFGwaJj08


Here is the introduction of The Wonder of Encounters by Minglu Zeng:

https://www.amazon.com/Wonder-En ... er+of+Encounters%22




Kindle: https://www.amazon.com/Wonder-En ... nters%22#nav-subnav



http://www.dwpcbooks.com/product/html/?84.html

Thanks for your clicks , best wishes!
 
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