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'Slaughterhouse 5' by Kurt Vonnegut (1 Viewer)

Stewart

Senior Member
Kurt Vonnegut’s Slaughterhouse 5 is seen as his best work and a modern classic although, having completed it, I’m left wondering why. Blending science fiction with his memoirs Vonnegut has created a meta-fictional novel where time travel is a primary plot device; one that allows him the freedom to dismiss chronology in the telling of his tale.

Billy Pilgrim is a war veteran, having been a prisoner of war in a converted abattoir in Dresden. Years after the war he is involved in a plane crash which causes him to become “unstuck in time”; a strange condition that allows him to travel to any point in his life, or even to the planet Tralfamadore where the aliens that live there view life as a single representation of every moment. Through his frequent travels in time, Billy Pilgrim gets to relive many points of his life such as Dresden, his marriage, and even his death; all of these combine to show Billy’s attempt at making sense of the world, his fatalist conclusions permeating the novel.

The story of Billy Pilgrim doesn’t start until the second chapter, the first, instead, being the author’s apology for the novel’s mess (although he states you can’t make sense of a massacre) and how, in his mind, the book came to be. The prose is minimalist and repetitive. Phrases appear regularly or statements reappear reworded. The use of “so it goes” whenever something dies, be it a person or bubbles in champagne, is understandable, however, in its need to demonstrate death as something routine and cheap, it does become grating.

There are many characters in Slaughterhouse 5 although I don’t feel that any of them were given much depth. People appear for a paragraph and then Billy Pilgrim is off on his travels before you have a chance to get to know them. Even Billy failed to hold my attention, possibly because we fail to really get to know him. The author spends time telling us about him rather than showing him doing anything which, I feel, cheapens the experience. His condition, that of being “unstuck in time”, leaves a nice ambiguity about the novel although it’s highly probable that his travelling is a delusional passage between memories brought on by the trauma of witnessing the bombing of Dresden.

Maybe the book is a product of its time or maybe there’s something I’m missing but Slaughterhouse 5 is not a novel I’d recommend. Having no experience of Vonnegut’s other work I can’t say whether this book, being part memoir, is a typical example of his canon. While the novel is understandably a mess, I can’t help but feel that the prose and characterisation are lacking and what, on paper, sounds like a great idea has been put through a literary slaughterhouse. So it goes.
 

strangedaze

Senior Member
I disagree, though uncle Kurt's writing doesn't appeal to everyone. All of his fiction employs that ironic narrative voice, so if you didn't like SH5, chances are you won't like his other works, either. But if you're up to try another, I'd do either Cat's Cradle or Breakfast of Champions.
 

Rob

Senior Member
The first Vonnegut book I read was the Sirens of Titan, which I thought was excellent. Slaughterhouse 5 followed a few months later, and I thoroughly enjoyed that, too. (And Timequake, since).

What appeals to me most about Vonnegut's writing is his keen observation of the real world. He takes a fresh look at things we all accept without question. That's as true of Slaughterhouse 5 as it is the others that I've read.

I can see why it wouldn't appeal to everyone, but he's up there in my list of favourite authors, and I plan to read more of his books next year.

Cheers,
Omni
 
I'm currently reading Slaughterhouse 5. I think it's an excellent book. It can be a bit confusing at times, but overall it's really good. There are some funny parts in the book as well. I also find the Tralfamadorians' way of looking at life pretty interesting.
 

Hodge

pliable
Senior Member
Vonnegut is the king of dark satire. He's one of American's best writers, if not one of the best in the world. And he just put out a new book at age 82...
 
I have the book, but I have not finished reading it yet. I have a habit of doing that. What I read was quite good. You are definately missing something. Vonnegut is a literary master. I am currently enjoying Breakfast of Champions, and I will be picking up and finishing Slaughterhouse 5 soon.
 
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