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Short Film (Comedy - 21 pages) (1 Viewer)

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Kist

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Would anyone mind reading my short script? I wrote it the other day, and I just want to know if it's okay. It's a comedy about a demonic possession. I might film it with friends and post it online for fun.
 

Kist

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  • TITLE: Untitled
  • GENRE: Comedy
  • WORD COUNT: 3089
  • BLURB: Young man must stop demon from ending the world.
  • AUDIENCE DESCRIPTION: 20s-30s and possibly older if you don't mind immature characters.
  • EXPECTATIONS (Explain the type of feedback you required and the mechanism that will be used to gather it, such as use of on-line forms, questionnaires with MSS, etc.)
  • TIMESCALE: A week or sooner preferably
  • AVAILABLE FORMATS: PDF file or I can upload it to google docs if preferred
  • OTHER INFORMATION: It's about demonic possession, but it's still pretty light.
 

Darren White

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Yeah, I noticed. Posts in this forum are automatically put in moderation. I do my best to be online as much as possible to approve them, here it is :)
 

Aquilo

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Kist, you might find that by reading and commenting on other authors' stories that you'll get more beta interest here. I know beta work takes time out of a busy schedule, but by taking time and care with other members work, other authors wlll do the same with you. :)
 

Fatclub

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At 3K words, it won't take long. Pm it to me and I'll give my thruppence-worth. Sounds like it could be fun! Give me a couple of days, though.
 

Kist

Senior Member
At 3K words, it won't take long. Pm it to me and I'll give my thruppence-worth. Sounds like it could be fun! Give me a couple of days, though.

Excellent! It's mostly dialogue, so it should be an easy read. I've uploaded it to my google drive. I'll PM you the link. :)
 

Princesisto

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If you still need another Beta reader, I could look at your script.

But will you comment on my short story? (6,000 words)

If so, we can do an e-mail exchange.
 
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