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River of Backhands (1 Viewer)

Grimus

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Come with me, but please wipe your feet for
a trip down the River of Backhands.

Interesting fact, it was once called "regret"
But the locals changed its name for the reaction it gets.

It wants you mad.
It don't want you dead.

If it did, they would call it the "River of Death".

So, hold your excitment, don't slap yourself yet.
Set your clocks back, and think how it should have went.

It went the other way, and today is the total of another day.
We just switched places, as simple as that.

Some discrepenacies... discrepancies.
But everything else appears on track.

Do I know you?
You look familiar to me.

And why do I have memories of us watching TV?

Not sure how or why, but the band got signed.
Music just got serious and I lost all my free time.

It went the other way, and today is the total of another day.
We just switched places, as simple as that.

Some discrepenacies... discrepancies.
But everything else appears on track.

Back to the day when life was grabbed by the reigns.
And instead of going south, it turned out ok...
and instead of going south, it turned out ok..
and instead of going south, it turned out ok.

But adjust the weights....
Alter the shape..
A few more discrepancies, but we're still on track.
 

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