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Gumby

Staff member
Co-Owner


Fisheye moon stare down at me
from highest branch
in tallest tree.

Do you see man break apart
hear the crack of human heart?

I look up, but
you never blink
in paper sky of bluest ink.

Fisheye moon just stare at me.

From highest branch
in tallest tree.



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rcallaci

Staff member
Administrator
Always love your poetry. In this it's gentle yet heartbreaking. A simple yet elegant poem.

'Do you see man break apart
hear the crack of human heart?' yes, yes, I hear that crack---

Brava
 

apple

WF Veterans
It really is heartbreaking...., and so lonely. I like the way there was air between the lines. I felt so much space and distance. Really well done, Cindy.
 

Gumby

Staff member
Co-Owner
Thank you, Bob. You are always kind and supportive with your praise. We are all hearing a collective crack in the human heart.

Sondra, to hear you say that you felt the emptiness expressed in this makes me feel like I captured a little piece of it in this one. Thank you.
 
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