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Piss Mist [ Explicit ] (1 Viewer)

Grimus

Member
Your platforms stupid as hell.
Open to the public, stuck in censorship cells.
Maybe I should keep my mouth shut in case..
All you b*tches I talk sh*t on want to get in my face.
Because you want to turn my word games to violence.
Maybe I should note your name and stalk your family in silence.


I'm your villain in any scenario!


But when you take away my outlets, I throw away my halo.


Throw away my halo
Throw away my halo
Throw away my halo
Throw away my halo


Now you've got special rules for me!
And ignore injustices I see!
And everybody wonders why I'm p*ssed!
They wonder why I turn to bombs and fists!


They want to know why I made you my victim!
But they don't see the halo I've been stripped of!


I got sh*t to say but they don't hear!
And I'm angry you don't see it either!


Because those mother f*ckers closed my vents.
The pressures building, and I'm hot as sh*t.


And by the way..
F*ck your fact check!


You ain't my overlord, so step the f*ck back!


Now you've got special rules for me!
And ignore injustices I see!
And everybody wonders why I'm p*ssed!
They wonder why I turn to bombs and fists!


They want to know why I made you my victim!
But they don't see the halo I've been stripped of!


I got sh*t to say but they don't hear!
And I'm angry you don't see it either!


Because those mother f*ckers closed my vents.
The pressures building, and I'm hot as sh*t.


And by the way..
F*ck your fact check!


You ain't my overlord so step the f*ck back!


Your platforms stupid as hell
Open to the public, stuck in censorship cells.
Maybe I should keep my mouth shut incase.
All you b*tches I talk sh*t on want to get in my face.
Because you want to turn my word games to violence.
Maybe I should note your name and stalk your family in silence.
 
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2020Syd2020

Senior Member
This is bold,

I’m not a gamer, but you could also read this about social media and even interactions on platforms such as this.

Again it feels like a performance piece, but in comparison to the other piece you shared this feels a lot more complete.

Cheers for sharing

Syd
 

Grimus

Member
Most of the ways I write I take a bunch of abstracts that have similar tones and then blend them all together.. it leaves it open to interpretation in a collage type of way.. I like writing stuff like that because I feel outskirts of the collage give a subtler hint of images while the overlaps change the vibes of each other to create a similar but new vibe, like mixing colors and getting other colors.. part of it for me is I don't know what the overlap coloring is until it is finished.. and I like to leave it somewhat vague. This one though was just one solid chunk so it seems more complete.
 
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