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Annie. Marie

Senior Member
All energy
speaks from the same tongue
Individual thought
shapes individual reality.
Hostility stems from the ego.
Questions of who is right.
Neglecting that the answer may be
Anyone.

Chanting recognizes
Praying recognizes
Mediating.
All emanation of related vibrations.
Full hearted belief within intention
will cause energy
to speak for itself
and no matter what chosen form,
if pure with intent,
existence will always echo back.

 

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
All energy
speaks from the same tongue
Individual thought
shapes individual reality.
Hostility stems from the ego.
Questions of who is right.
Neglecting that the answer may be
Anyone.

Chanting recognizes
Praying recognizes
Mediating.
All emanation of related vibrations.
Full hearted belief within intention
will cause energy
to speak for itself
and no matter what chosen form,
if pure with intent,
existence will always echo back.


Though I am not religious, but I really related to it. For a moment I too wanted my energy to be generated this way as " One " , nail head hit at the single point.

Thanks Annie for sharing this.
I admire your critique strength also.
Keep writing and sharing here.
Good luck
Ritu
 

2020Syd2020

Senior Member
Hello,

What this piece does so well is to echo a sense of spirituality without feeling overtly didactic. I get a sense of mindfulness within this piece, fundamentally and regardless of your belief system, you need to carry out self care. They say the body is a temple and in a sense it is true, but really the temple doesn’t belong to some deity but to the ego and the self.

Thank you

Syd
 

happy-hippie

Senior Member
All energy
speaks from the same tongue
Individual thought
shapes individual reality.
Hostility stems from the ego.
Questions of who is right.
Neglecting that the answer may be
Anyone.

Chanting recognizes
Praying recognizes
Mediating.
All emanation of related vibrations.
Full hearted belief within intention
will cause energy
to speak for itself
and no matter what chosen form,
if pure with intent,
existence will always echo back.

I like the message in this poem. We use different methods to get to the same destination---purity of intent is the true pathway.

In the second stanza line 4, should it be emanations -with an s?

Lovely poem.
 
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