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Firemajic

Poetry Mentor
Staff member
Senior Mentor
well this is different..I can see that you are very creative and I love that..hahaaa... your frustration was expressed in a unique way.. thanks for a cool read...
 

ned

Senior Member
poses more questions then it answers - perhaps needs expanding?

why does the narrator hate buying earphones? why do they break?
what frustration? - it all seems very polite.

like the quirkiness and the focus - has potential

Ned
 
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