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Micro-Leviathan (1 Viewer)

Darkkin

WF Veterans
Micro-Leviathan

Leviathan, beast, a legend renowned
greatest lifted by the smallest...
only to succumb to become
a feast cast on a bleak expanse

All that remain as days dwindle
bones and a haunting shape
of what this creature once was

A predator at the apex...

that dragonfly on the sidewalk
 

Phil Istine

WF Veterans
Yes, an excellent twist at the end. The only thing I might change is the title, by dropping the 'Micro-' part as it could strengthen the final twist.
A decent read. Thank you.
 
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