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Metamorphosis (1 Viewer)

jenthepen

Staff member
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I like the idea of evolving realisation of wisdom - maybe that's the last hope we have?

On a mundane note: you don't need the word 'out' at the end of line 4. Emerge covers the idea of wings coming out and the line works well without it.
 

petergrimes

Senior Member
Hello little dunnock, hedge sparrow, Ritu the poet.

How do? Haven't seen thee in awhile. I'm glad you haven't stopped being frustrated with the sheep, but in your poem they have learned to think for themselves, stand up for themselves, I hope this signals a turning point for society, then I could call you Ritu the Prophet. Hope you're well mate, all the best PG
 

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
Hello little dunnock, hedge sparrow, Ritu the poet.

How do? Haven't seen thee in awhile. I'm glad you haven't stopped being frustrated with the sheep, but in your poem they have learned to think for themselves, stand up for themselves, I hope this signals a turning point for society, then I could call you Ritu the Prophet. Hope you're well mate, all the best PG
Society's radar do catch such signals, may be wavelength, frequency takes its time. 😉😉
Don't dare call me prophet 😂😂 I would rather love to be called a sinner. I am a fan of Schindler by the way.... who unknowingly turned his selfish motive into a very human cause. I like imperfect people doing good deeds not always but atleast sometimes when their conscience pushes them to bring a change.

Hope you are doing well buddy. Your cricket team must be scoring a lot to keep you busy.
But still once in a while here we deserve your poems.
Hope to read those soon.
Good luck
Ritu
 
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