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Memories (1 Viewer)

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
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ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
Waiting for the rest of the part J.

Memories are our treasures that stay inside us, as our gems with very pleasant fragrances. Every time we open the locker, it fills our soul with those touching fragrances.

Keep writing buddy

Ritu
 

2020Syd2020

Senior Member
Hello,

I think I’m terms of narrative and what you’re saying this has great potential, the story is there and creates emotion in the reader. But, I think this would benefit from being structured to more resemble a traditional poem, for me it lacks space for the reader.

Cheers

Syd
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Hello,

I think I’m terms of narrative and what you’re saying this has great potential, the story is there and creates emotion in the reader. But, I think this would benefit from being structured to more resemble a traditional poem, for me it lacks space for the reader.

Cheers

Syd

Thank You very much Syd, I may come back to it. It was more just my real story as a child.
But I’m grateful for your help.
Thank You [emoji120]
 
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