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Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Shackled &
claustrophobic
I’m still here
suffocating
in my own
blood
choking

Writhing
writing I’m just your pain
driven puppet
my pen just the conductor
your lost soul just conducted
the orchestra just fucked it
to my twisted
putrid
heart
my cold back heart

Each pull
each pull

Tears holes
tears role

Each stroke
more broke

Another sombre line
crater tones
create the deepest tones

Haunting harp melody
blood stained heart
melodies
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2020Syd2020

Senior Member
Hello,

I think I’ve mentioned it on this forum before but, have you come across Stag’s Leap by Sharon Olds? It won the TS Eliot award for poetry and it’s a collection about the breakdown of her marriage. There are similar themes in her work and in yours. I can’t recommend this collection highly enough. It would definitely be worth the read she doesn’t shy away from offering her reader am honest open window to her emotions at the time.

If you have time check it out.

Cheers
Syd
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Hello,

I think I’ve mentioned it on this forum before but, have you come across Stag’s Leap by Sharon Olds? It won the TS Eliot award for poetry and it’s a collection about the breakdown of her marriage. There are similar themes in her work and in yours. I can’t recommend this collection highly enough. It would definitely be worth the read she doesn’t shy away from offering her reader am honest open window to her emotions at the time.

If you have time check it out.

Cheers
Syd

Thank You very much Syd, I will have a look.
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