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Lively Spirits (1 Viewer)

TuesdayEve

Friends of WF
Lively Spirits

Queue up the dream
wind up the music
spin with the music.

The venue packed,
the balcony stacked,
high energy flows.

On stage, a misfit band
ignites, and sweats beneath
hot lights.

Live stream smiles
dance free in the aisles,
we gray haired teens revived.

Queue up the dream
wind up the music
spin with the magic.

A finger snappin’, cold drink
coolin’,
hot feet rockin’ beat.

We sang off key to those
old songs, Dylan, Stones,
Little Feet.

The band jammed on and
we belonged together as
one light.

Old bodies, lively spirits
young hearts, sparked fires
in the night.

Queue up the dream
wind up the music
spin with the magic.
 

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
Lively Spirits

Queue up the dream
wind up the music
spin with the music.

The venue packed,
the balcony stacked,
high energy flows.

On stage, a misfit band
ignites, and sweats beneath
hot lights.

Live stream smiles
dance free in the aisles,
we gray haired teens revived.

Queue up the dream
wind up the music
spin with the magic.

A finger snappin’, cold drink
coolin’,
hot feet rockin’ beat.

We sang off key to those
old songs, Dylan, Stones,
Little Feet.

The band jammed on and
we belonged together as
one light.

Old bodies, lively spirits
young hearts, sparked fires
in the night.

Queue up the dream
wind up the music
spin with the magic.

Lovely scene and theme, for the musical dream.

If you are singer as well, other than the composer, hope to see you sing someday.

Thanks for sharing this cute song

Ritu
 

TuesdayEve

Friends of WF
Dear Ritu, it is lyrical with a chorus and rhythmic also,
thank you for noticing. It’s a form of poetry called
Sweetelle, rhyming isn’t necessary but I enjoy it and
I’m very glad you did too. P.S. I wish I could sing.
 

Annie. Marie

Senior Member
I like the subtle rhyming you have throughout. I also like the imagery that these words gave me of souls simply being alive and letting energy take them through music.
Thank you for sharing!

-Annie
 

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
Dear Ritu, it is lyrical with a chorus and rhythmic also,
thank you for noticing. It’s a form of poetry called
Sweetelle, rhyming isn’t necessary but I enjoy it and
I’m very glad you did too. P.S. I wish I could sing.
Hi TuesdayEve

Lovely. The form of poetry is equally sweet..... Sweetelle...

Thanks

Ritu
 
Lively Spirits

Queue up the dream
wind up the music
spin with the music.

The venue packed,
the balcony stacked,
high energy flows.

On stage, a misfit band
ignites, and sweats beneath
hot lights.

Live stream smiles
dance free in the aisles,
we gray haired teens revived.

Queue up the dream
wind up the music
spin with the magic.

A finger snappin’, cold drink
coolin’,
hot feet rockin’ beat.

We sang off key to those
old songs, Dylan, Stones,
Little Feet.

The band jammed on and
we belonged together as
one light.

Old bodies, lively spirits
young hearts, sparked fires
in the night.

Queue up the dream
wind up the music
spin with the magic.
The atmosphere, the music, the setting, the nostalgic feelings...your words brought me there...great poem. Thank you so much for sharing!
 
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