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Late night ramble (1 Viewer)

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
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2020Syd2020

Senior Member
Hello,

This has a real pulpy feel to it, which I like there is a fuck it attitude when it comes to language that feels anarchic and kind of fits in the the central conceit of the piece. If I had to be completely honest with you I think it relies somewhat on the reader being familiar with From Dusk till Dawn which puts it in dangerous ground because when you expect knowledge from your reader you’re limiting the impact and the range of the piece. I would also probably focus on vampires or zombies as the metaphor rather than both. Save one for part two.

Looking forward to the next instalment

Cheers

Syd
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Hello,

This has a real pulpy feel to it, which I like there is a fuck it attitude when it comes to language that feels anarchic and kind of fits in the the central conceit of the piece. If I had to be completely honest with you I think it relies somewhat on the reader being familiar with From Dusk till Dawn which puts it in dangerous ground because when you expect knowledge from your reader you’re limiting the impact and the range of the piece. I would also probably focus on vampires or zombies as the metaphor rather than both. Save one for part two.

Looking forward to the next instalment

Cheers

Syd

Thank You Syd. It was just mindless babble.
Late last night and quickly put it down.
I might do something else with it.
Thank You.
 
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