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Journey (1 Viewer)

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
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Also...

It is never a race
to the top
but a journey
it is what you
learn along the way
the journey is
riddled with failures,
heartbreak
broken bones
and exhausted souls
but you
must keep going.

The moral of this story is, we are all small on this beautiful planet.
Be kind.

J.h
 
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Jk_Sl

Senior Member
I would change the you to I...and make it about oneself

Thank you, it was more a universal message of lifting everyone in this pandemic, an unselfish gift to life people’s hearts.
Thank you for your kindness.
 

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
Holocene

You're concentrating
on making it it to the top
but then you stop and
look behind you and
see the most beautiful natural
landscape.
It makes you feel small.
You see how magnificent
the world is and then
see how not magnificent
you are compared to it.

It is never a race
to the top
but a journey
it is what you
learn along the way
the journey is
riddled with failures,
heartbreak
broken bones
and exhausted souls
but you
must keep going.

The moral of this story is, we are all small on this beautiful planet.
Be kind.

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J.h

Hi J

Very beautiful message through your poem I got, life is a journey, not a destination. And here journey is ultimate not the destination.

Keep writing.
Good luck

Ritu
 

happy-hippie

Senior Member
Holocene

You're concentrating
on making it it to the top
but then you stop and
look behind you and
see the most beautiful natural
landscape.
It makes you feel small.
You see how magnificent
the world is and then
see how not magnificent
you are compared to it.

It is never a race
to the top
but a journey
it is what you
learn along the way
the journey is
riddled with failures,
heartbreak
broken bones
and exhausted souls
but you
must keep going.

The moral of this story is, we are all small on this beautiful planet.
Be kind.

7642704e148763b450581b78ea35fc2f.jpg


J.h
Through it all...just keep going.

Great message.

Thank you for sharing.
 
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