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jam tomorrow (1 Viewer)

2020Syd2020

Senior Member
Hello,

I like this, I’ve never been a fan of anthropomorphised food stuffs because as this piece clearly articulates can you imagine, living knowing that the end game is to make it to someone’s toast? For such a fun piece you’ve been able to articulate a sense of existential dread.

Cheers

Syd
 
I posted this (slightly edited) as a recent challenge entry (okay to post as challenge finished). I like to have fun by seeing things a little differently sometimes:

jam tomorrow

pinholes pricked
in the jam jar lid
so we can breathe

the stars revolve
Heavens open
raspberry Armageddon

I really liked this (and felt so bad for the jam)!
 
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