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in the flesh #1 (1 Viewer)

Greyson

Senior Member
i saw you today,
not in the butterflies,
bees, the blossoming flowers or trees
but in the flesh.

all the words i'd rehearsed
so confident in the mind's theater
fled.

leaving me staring, naked,
as you drove by.
and i,
i went back to walking.
 
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Foxee

Patron
Patron
I've had that naked feeling when my rehearsed words (or any words) go missing. You put it so beautifully and I love the imagery but wow I hate when that happens!
 
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