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Hope Vs. Torment (1 Viewer)

Bleach1

Member
Hope Vs. Torment

A spark of truth it shocks to the core,

The thoughts of the future charging that very spark,

Brings hope to the field battling against the tormented zone,

The hope prevails and tosses the torment to the dark depths where it came from.
 

Vitaly Ana

WF Veterans
Great final line. Nice to see Hope winning another one!

Up until that line, the battle is somewhat ambiguous to the reader (intended?) though, overall I liked the poem. Thank you for sharing!!
 
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