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hole (one swear word) (1 Viewer)

petergrimes

Senior Member
hole

temporal black hole
rent in space time
full of shit
I cannot find
bank cards
keys
treasured photos
odd socks
good jobs
marriage proposals
all I've got
are empty diaries
beginners guides
dot to dots, to
work out how

make us whole
 

rcallaci

Staff member
Administrator
sounds like one hell of a mid-life crisis. Looking in the glass darkly - having a moment of nihilistic angst --the first line is the crux the poem - looking at one's life through the years, feeling that you're a fraud-(full of shit) and reliving the moments of emptiness--you find yourself in a temporal black hole and you find yourself trying to climb out and to fill the emptiness with a fresh breath of air--- that's my take and I find this piece quite good. Makes you think...

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