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ritudimrinautiyal

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what a hell
that would be
spending an eternity
with myself


Typo error in the title: it should be Heaven in place of Heavan.
For some heaven is the door to all pleasures, but just one has to think of dying only...., what an irony, after death before death, living stays only for desires.
 

happy-hippie

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I noticed the typo in the title. Then I noticed you corrected it in the poem but not in the title of the thread...so it got me thinking..

1. Heavan is wrong without you
2. Heavan is not heaven without you
3. Without love (Of self or another) heavan is not heaven, it's hell.

Was that your intention? It's clever but I could be making up things.
 
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