Here's the first act I wrote for a script-writing class. It's written for a grade B horror market. I already got feed back from classmates and I was wondering if their opinions were universal, so I wanted to expand to a larger support group. Please be honest and critical. Don't be afraid about hurting my feelings. This is still a rough draft so obvious mistakes will be corrected. I'm looking for feedback regarding general impressions, plot flow, interests, character impressions and development. Stuff like that. Not grammer or screenwriting format corrections. THANKS!!
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