Here's the first act I wrote for a script-writing class. It's written for a grade B horror market. I already got back feedback from my classmates and I was wondering if their suggestions were universal so I wanted to expand to a larger support group. Please be critical in your assessment. You can't hurt my feelings! And keep in mind it's a rough draft still so minor mistakes will obviously be corrected. I'm looking for opinions on subject matter/interest, character design, flow and understandability of plot, general impressions, etc. Not gramatical errors and such. THANKS!