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H.A.S. The project name has been abbreviated for your protection. (1 Viewer)



Here's the first act I wrote for a script-writing class. It's written for a grade B horror market. I already got back feedback from my classmates and I was wondering if their suggestions were universal so I wanted to expand to a larger support group. Please be critical in your assessment. You can't hurt my feelings! And keep in mind it's a rough draft still so minor mistakes will obviously be corrected. I'm looking for opinions on subject matter/interest, character design, flow and understandability of plot, general impressions, etc. Not gramatical errors and such. THANKS!


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most of us don't like having to go elsewhere to read material... so, if you want feedback, you'll do better posting the excerpt here...


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I'm not sure why he did it but there's an exact same post in another thread which I've responded to.