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FROM A ROCKY START TO A BITTER END (R.I.P. KIRBY MORROW) (1 Viewer)

ladygarmadone17

Senior Member
IT WAS A ROCKY START
WHEN I FIRST GOT INTO NINJAGO
ANOTHER FANDOM
AT FIRST, DIFFERENT FROM THE ANIME
I HAD WATCHED LONG AGO

CRISP 3D IMAGERY
NINJAS WITH SUCH HEAVENLY VOICES
A VERY POWERFUL PLOT HOOK
CATCHY THEME SONG, I COULDN’T STOP HEARING,
MORE SINGING SINCE, I HAD NO CHOICE

I HAD TO WATCH AN EPISODE OR TWO
AND THATS WHEN I HEARD THE BLESSING
COLE’S VOICE ACTOR FINALLY SINGING “GLOW WORM”
FROM THAT TIME FORWARD
I WATCHED IN RELISH OF EVERY MOMENT
SEASON 8 UNTIL SEASON 14

SOON I REWATCHED EVERY EPISODE, EVERY MOVIE,
EVEN EVERY SPECIAL AND SHORT
UNTIL A GUT PUNCH, TO MY NEWFOUND CHILDHOOD
A POISONOUS PLAGUE
KILLED THE VERY VOICE ACTOR
THAT ONCE POSSESSED
COLE’S BEAUTIFUL “GLOW WORM” VOICE
THE VOICE OF AN ANGEL

SILENCED, LIKE THE CATACOMBS
ETCHED IN THE HEAT OF NIGHT
LOSING CONTROL,
IN 2020 VISION I SAW
THE SHADOWS OF DEATH
LOOMING OVER THIS TANGLED WEB
HE WAS STUCK, IN THOSE SILLY STRINGLIKE
STRANDS OF TIME
READY TO TAKE HIS SOUL

FROM THAT VERY ROCKY START
TO THE HEART BREAKING BITTER END
MY BODY WASN’T PREPARED FOR
MUCH LESS UNEXPECTEDLY
THE HORROR AND SORROW
OF YET ANOTHER OF MY MISFORTUNES
THAT ONLY I SOMEHOW FORESAW
BUT NEVER WANTED

UNTIL THE NIGHT BEFORE
TOO LATE TO RESUSCITATE
R.I.P. KIRBY MORROW,
MY GLIMMERING GLOW WORM,
MAY YOU ALWAYS BE REMEMBERED
FOR A BLESSING, WE WILL NEVER FORGET YOU
NOW THAT YOU’RE IN A BETTER PLACE
 

Darkkin

WF Veterans
Turn off the CAPLOCK! FORMAT IS SCREAMING at the reader, which makes this piece all but impossible to read. It is a basic netiquette issue because as writers, everything we write lends an impression.
 

Darkkin

WF Veterans
I can appreciate the emotion, but keep in mind editing is a necessary evil of the writing process Readability tends to be a heavily judged element in presentation. Any piece worth its time and effort is worth an edit.
 
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