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petergrimes

Senior Member
Hi Happy, this is a wonderful piece. The way you create such a calm and peaceful space at the beginning and slowly ratchet up the tension. How the body reacts, it is well observed and well written. 'Clean the soot from the silence'. Is a personal favourite phrase. I like it that we are not told the subject/full reason, the backstory behind it all. Good work, all the best PG
 
Hi Happy, this is a wonderful piece. The way you create such a calm and peaceful space at the beginning and slowly ratchet up the tension. How the body reacts, it is well observed and well written. 'Clean the soot from the silence'. Is a personal favourite phrase. I like it that we are not told the subject/full reason, the backstory behind it all. Good work, all the best PG
Thanks PG. Nice to meet you. Thank for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I really appreciate it.
 
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