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Does this make grammatical sense? (1 Viewer)

druid12000

Senior Member
"she made her way over to him in smooth, effortless fashion."

Just food for thought:

I'm not wild about the word 'effortless' in this context, maybe replace 'fashion' with 'manner'?

And 'made her way over to' could be replaced with 'approached'.

I'm a 'less is more' kinda guy :icon_cheesygrin:
 
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