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Dinner is served (1 Viewer)

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Classical music
Liver and wine
Words as weapons

No need for knives
Music fades
Tongues silent

Body language
Eyes undressing
Hearts beating
Faster

Neck pulsing
Shivering spine
She’s mine

Tongue blades
Conversation fades
Lambs slaughtered

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J.h

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AnnieJay

Senior Member
Wow J. I think it is my favorite of yours so far. It's beautifully written with so few words, and it paints such a vivid picture. Well done!

-AnnieJay
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Wow J. I think it is my favorite of yours so far. It's beautifully written with so few words, and it paints such a vivid picture. Well done!

-AnnieJay

Thank you so much Annie, it’s funny.
I was thinking about the TV series earlier about Hannibal with Mads Mikkelsen.
I was just playing around with the general theme of the show , glad you like it.
Thank you.

J.h
 

happy-hippie

Senior Member
I had to read this a few times to let it sink in.

I really liked the last line. It reads to me like two people who shouldn't be together who kill each other by choosing to be together...sacrificing themselves for a moment of pleasure.

That's where my brain went. I like the imagery and the set up.

Nice.
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
I had to read this a few times to let it sink in.

I really liked the last line. It reads to me like two people who shouldn't be together who kill each other by choosing to be together...sacrificing themselves for a moment of pleasure.

That's where my brain went. I like the imagery and the set up.

Nice.

Thank you very much.

Almost like a lovers death - song by ursine vulpine, have a listen, haunting lyrics.

Thank you again for your kindness.

J.h
 
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