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Dark Egret (1 Viewer)

Darkkin

WF Veterans
Dark Egret

It was a fortress, glacier made
designs discerned by lost time
dug from aeons of shells paid

Bone white still visible in spots
where the birch and maple thin
raw scars on a corridor of knots

And it was from these reaches
a soul dared to defy the laws—
a leap above pebbled beaches.

Long fingers, white and wide
lifted to trace a fresh breathed
Westerly, no place left to hide.

Saffron and sour green awake
to infuse a slumberous indigo,
and in its shadows she quakes.

Beneath the faded cottonwood
the still river an aphotic mirror,
in the dark the fledgling stood.
 

Firemajic

Poetry Mentor
Staff member
Senior Mentor
As usual, this has breathtaking imagery, majestic vistas... and the last line is a portent of a new arrival, and new poems to come... hopefully ;)
 
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