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Complete With Incomplete (1 Viewer)

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
Lets meet like imperfects,
as we are, with our imperfect views,
with skies so different, contrasting blues.
You nurture my dream,
I would shoulder your thought.
Striving and striving,
To bring us into wrought.

Paths would seem so dilapidated,
Milestones would seem captivated.
With sun all that direct,
our feet would be burning.
But our journey would be common,
common musings would be churning.
Would come across mirages all together,
would still love fantasies, not to be true
But our world of virtues would be one,
and pairs of feet two.
To follow our consciences' chosen signs,
we would dig together our internal mines.
But there would be an unseen but felt perfection,
in the way we would be complementing each other, with our flaws with our strengths,
Let's grow inside each other, that accrete
Let's choose each other's incompleteness,
to get complete.

Ritu Dimri Nautiyal
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Lets meet like imperfects,
as we are, with our imperfect views,
with skies so different, contrasting blues.
You nurture my dream,
I would shoulder your thought.
Striving and striving,
To bring us into wrought.

Paths would seem so dilapidated,
Milestones would seem captivated.
With sun all that direct,
our feet would be burning.
But our journey would be common,
common musings would be churning.
Would come across mirages all together,
would still love fantasies, not to be true
But our world of virtues would be one,
and pairs of feet two.
To follow our consciences' chosen signs,
we would dig together our internal mines.
But there would be an unseen but felt perfection,
in the way we would be complementing each other, with our flaws with our strengths,
Let's grow inside each other, that accrete
Let's choose each other's incompleteness,
to get complete.

Ritu Dimri Nautiyal

I really like this , meet like imperfects.
We are all imperfectly perfect, you say you have flaws I say it’s beauty.

Thank you for sharing Ritu.

J.h
 
Lets meet like imperfects,
as we are, with our imperfect views,
with skies so different, contrasting blues.
You nurture my dream,
I would shoulder your thought.
Striving and striving,
To bring us into wrought.

Paths would seem so dilapidated,
Milestones would seem captivated.
With sun all that direct,
our feet would be burning.
But our journey would be common,
common musings would be churning.
Would come across mirages all together,
would still love fantasies, not to be true
But our world of virtues would be one,
and pairs of feet two.
To follow our consciences' chosen signs,
we would dig together our internal mines.
But there would be an unseen but felt perfection,
in the way we would be complementing each other, with our flaws with our strengths,
Let's grow inside each other, that accrete
Let's choose each other's incompleteness,
to get complete.

Ritu Dimri Nautiyal

I loved this line" you nurture my dream, I would shoulder your thought

Two imperfect people journeying, growing and becoming whole together...I like it.
 

Jk_Sl

Senior Member
Thanks Happy.
Yeah imperfects just only wish to walk by each other's side complementing each other.

Ritu

You’re welcome [emoji4]
Too true,
Not a care in the world, no internet, no phones and just the crashing of waves with imperfectly perfect company.
I replied to the wrong thank you but still true and funny , when are we all going [emoji108][emoji4]

J.h
 

ritudimrinautiyal

Senior Member
You’re welcome [emoji4]
Too true,
Not a care in the world, no internet, no phones and just the crashing of waves with imperfectly perfect company.
I replied to the wrong thank you but still true and funny , when are we all going [emoji108][emoji4]

J.h

Lets see when Pulse decides, since she is our senior mentor, let the privilege stay with her.

Thanks
Ritu
 
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