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Bring On the ‘Beach Effect’ More Often and Create the Life We All Crave More! (1 Viewer)

Lucid Being

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Jack of all trades

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Not sure I agree with the healing power of chlorinated pools, but the rest is interesting. What about a soak in a bath or a foot soak. I use Epsom salt foot soaks for sore muscles and find it helps.

As for the writing, again the wall of text bothered me. It also seemed a little short. If this is for a magazine, maybe you find a way to expand it.
 
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