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Beasties! Beasties! Everywhere (1 Viewer)

rcallaci

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Beasties! Beasties! Everywhere #2

When the tide is very low
and the nightfall at its deepest
one can see the shadows dancing
down beneath and far below

Never sleeping always hungry
fear and loathing is our clothing
wings a flapping jaws a snapping
frenzied frantic beastie dance

All we beasties gather about
meanie beasties hip hop and shout
feastie beasties bite chop and pout
human beasties are evil devout

Arise! Arise! You mangled demons
time to fly in gloomy nightlight
let our terror be all consuming
Horror! Horror! Is thy name



a Beastie commentary:

we hip hops around in your heads
we suck on your brains until you're deads
 
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PiP

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A mean poem, Bob.

I wondered: time to fly in gloomy nightlight
If you could exchange gloomy for a more powerful and beastie word.
 

rcallaci

Staff member
Administrator
I wondered: time to fly in gloomy nightlight
If you could exchange gloomy for a more powerful and beastie word.

we loves the word gloomy-gloomy is a doomy word--a beastie word-- you're lucky our puppet master likes you because we is a temperamental lot we was abouts to bites your feet but He stopped usss
 
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