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A perfect death. (1 Viewer)


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Hey J.,

This is pretty dark - It strikes me that you call her 'my love' while hoping that she burns while living. It made me cringe-which meant the poem touched my emotions. This is good.

thanks for sharing.

Thank You very much.
I had thought about my love, I’ve heard it used a few times when a man is angry with a woman.
But as long as you enjoyed it in a strange way.
Thank You [emoji3590]
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