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    Buzz
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    INT. VEGAS CASINO -- EVENING

    In a highstakes game of blackjack, Moses doubles down unexpectedly.

    MOSES
    I feel lucky this time. I think I'll double down baby.

    DEALER
    Are you stupid, I have a 20. A freagin 20 man.

    CARD PLAYER 1
    Dude!! He's got a 20! You'll have to get a 21 to beat him.
    This isn't a good time to press your luck.
    He's going to wipe you off the map.

    CARD PLAYER 2
    No way. No f'ing way. I can't watch this.

    CARD PLAYER 3
    Yo mon. It's a 20 be on the board. The cawds don't lie!

    Moses hesitates for a second. Takes a deep breathe. Looks around. Takes a sip of his drink, ah...so refreshing, then taps for the additional card landing a 21!!!

    DEALER
    Jesus Christ man. You lucky SOB.
    Hold on let me reshuffle real quick.

    MOSES
    As long as I can keep splitting the deck.
    CUT TO:
    Jesus at the poker table.

  2. #2
    It's a bit on the cliched side...

    It sounds like the start of a bad joke. "Jesus, Moses and a jamaican guy are playing cards..." All you're missing is the rabbi.

    I have never been a fan of a person from one country writing another person's accent. You have to be a damn good writer to make it so it doesn't sound racist.

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