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#4 Cold (1 Viewer)

alana

Senior Member
This is very haunting, well done. I could also see you adjusting the shape of the poem a bit to sort of mirror the imagery of the staircase, eg. getting shorter and shorter as it goes:

The place you go at the
bottom of the stairs
a cellar cold, dark
hunkered in
a corner

rocking


It's great as is, though! :)
 
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