Writing Forums

Writing Forums is a privately-owned, community managed writing environment. We provide an unlimited opportunity for writers and poets of all abilities, to share their work and communicate with other writers and creative artists. We offer an experience that is safe, welcoming and friendly, regardless of your level of participation, knowledge or skill. There are several opportunities for writers to exchange tips, engage in discussions about techniques, and grow in your craft. You can also participate in forum competitions that are exciting and helpful in building your skill level. There's so much more for you to explore!

#30 Embracing Lucidity (1 Viewer)

Not open for further replies.


Senior Member
Lucid dreams, life unseen, waves stirring slumber’s depth.
Hospital gown, people surround, nurse saying time to go,
tears stream through good byes, white room without walls.

Rows, chrome rails, crisp sheets, patient’s wheeled beds,
Placed in my space, leaning to whisper, toward my face,
Embrace this dying time, inhale, follow your last exhale unafraid.

Confused intention, misinterpretation? Faint recollections, life’s collections.
Fearing, I shouldn’t be here. In goodness, health, spirit, being, vibrantly seeming.
Emotionless, her face, she pivots, dissolves. Alone, finality heavy, this room.

Transcendentally seeking God’s clarity. Remaining breath, waiting.
Sadness encumbered, resignation erased, resiliency embraced,
Fluttered eyes revealing awareness, joy feeling, life’s soft sweetness.
Not open for further replies.