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3 poems (1 Viewer)

asahmed1

Senior Member
My mind as a sponge,
dry and hardened
water poured upon
moist, it became.

#2 -

Fire torched the sky
man became many
Few remained resilliant,
others, feld the sea.

#3 -

In the light, shadows glow
mountains rise to the moon
sand brims beauty air.
 

TheFuhrer02

WF Veterans
I like the pictures painted in these pieces. They're mundane things given a different light and a deeper meaning. The wordplay was brilliant, too, like it was verging on Haiku.

The first is definitely my favorite. :D

Oh, and one more thing:

others, feld the sea.

I assume this was "fled?"
 

Gumby

Staff member
Co-Owner
Yes, you have managed to create beautiful images in my mind with just a few words. :)
 
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