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    I never looked back
    The Defendant is my past
    You are my future

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    You are my future
    In days passing bys
    Revelled in timely ways

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    Revelled in timely ways
    As midnight pumpkinates her
    Cinderella leaves

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    Cinderella Leaves
    Her very silken and taften seat
    The loveliest of scenes
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    Revelled in timely ways has 6 syllables... :/

    Cinderella leaves
    hopes dashed, hair mussed, dressed in rags...
    treading broken glass
    High school = much work = procrastination = mother shouting = shouting back at mother

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    "Taftened"?
    High school = much work = procrastination = mother shouting = shouting back at mother

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    From taftan??

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    Tartan? Tauten? Taffeta? I have no idea what you're trying to spell...
    High school = much work = procrastination = mother shouting = shouting back at mother

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    Quote Originally Posted by Trides View Post
    Tartan? Tauten? Taffeta? I have no idea what you're trying to spell...
    Taftan aplay on word for kaftan?

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    "Kaftan"? I don't get how a seat can be described as an item of clothing...

    But anyway, to restart the haikus.

    Treading broken glass
    (you were too brazen) pick up
    the stone that you threw!
    High school = much work = procrastination = mother shouting = shouting back at mother

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