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    raging eyes met mine
    across the obscene void when
    i looked in the mirror
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    I've never done Haikus before, so if I'm doing something wrong tell me!


    I looked in the mirror
    Brown hair draping down my face
    Then it was not there

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    then it was not there
    ice flow melted with warm breath
    cherry blossoms bud

    [an]Dephere - you fulfilled the syllable count of haiku and yours fits perfectly in this word game thread - traditional haiku is about seasons and nature but that's not the nature of this venture - so write on.
    "Tigers bloom where there's oodles of room." Zodiac Zoo

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    Cherry blossoms bud
    Uncouth stranger said when asked
    They're pink flowers mate
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    They're pink flowers mate
    They grow bifurcated buds
    Timothy Leary

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    Timothy Leary
    Sat and looked upon her face
    She was beautiful

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    Okay, thanks Penelope

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    She was beautiful

    Electrical banana

    Donovan song won.

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    Donovan song won
    If never to see a loss
    At least there's something

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    At least there's something
    In that little mind of yours
    Perhaps I misjudged

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    Perhaps I misjudged
    How far I had to measure
    The distance to leap

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