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  1. #1
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    Where is she.

    Alright I give up. I think this game of hide
    and seek, has gone on
    long enough.

    Come on, you can come out now.
    Ok you've won.
    There's no need to gloat.
    Where are you?

    Hello I shouted,
    no answer just a void.

    We're in dense woodland
    but where could she be.
    This is not like her
    she's never been here before.

    I feel the sweat,
    then I heard a voice.
    One I definitely know.

    My eyes flickered and my
    mouth was dry as I tried
    to answer her.

    It was at that moment I awoke
    from the coma I was in.
    What a relief to see her face again.

  2. #2
    It felt like a voice of your own consciousness trying to bring you back from your unconscious state to conscious state. Hide and seek between conscious state and unconscious state, for conscious state to win. Did I interpret it rightly knottla?

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    You did get how it was written ritu. I hope you don't mind me calling you ritu. Thanh you for reading and understanding my poem.

  4. #4
    Quote Originally Posted by knottla View Post
    You did get how it was written ritu. I hope you don't mind me calling you ritu. Thanh you for reading and understanding my poem.
    Of course call me Ritu

    Thanks

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