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  1. #1

    heaven

    what a hell
    that would be
    spending an eternity
    with myself
    Last edited by escorial; March 1st, 2021 at 11:55 AM.
    The only one who can heal you is you.




  2. #2
    Quote Originally Posted by escorial View Post
    what a hell
    that would be
    spending an eternity
    with myself

    Typo error in the title: it should be Heaven in place of Heavan.
    For some heaven is the door to all pleasures, but just one has to think of dying only...., what an irony, after death before death, living stays only for desires.

  3. #3
    I noticed the typo in the title. Then I noticed you corrected it in the poem but not in the title of the thread...so it got me thinking..

    1. Heavan is wrong without you
    2. Heavan is not heaven without you
    3. Without love (Of self or another) heavan is not heaven, it's hell.

    Was that your intention? It's clever but I could be making up things.
    Last edited by happy-hippie; March 1st, 2021 at 04:46 PM.

  4. #4
    Just a spelling error...your pov is rather interesting to ponder....
    The only one who can heal you is you.




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