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    How would he know it was the red baron?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Matchu View Post
    How would he know it was the red baron?

    The red D.III (later Fokker DR.1) coming at you gives it away.

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    I hope you can see my picture.

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    You have to be a pantser to be in one of my threads ...
    Craft / Draft / Graft And Write To Entertain Yourself And The reader.

  5. #95
    Yes . . . . .we all want to see the demise of "spanner eyes" . Begone you addle-groined fuddle-clarity, we'll eagerly get no less of you! We is perfeshunall writers hear!



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    "I believe in nothing but the holiness of the heart's affections and the Truth of the imagination". Keats, ​Letters

    "No man is an island entire of itself; every man is a piece of the continent, a part of the main . . . any man's death diminishes me, because I am involved in mankind. And therefore never send to know for whom the bell tolls -- it tolls for thee. " John Donne, Meditation XVII

  6. #96

    AZ:
    DAD: I miss your mother. SON: Keep practicing , Dad. It pulls a bit to the right.




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    "I believe in nothing but the holiness of the heart's affections and the Truth of the imagination". Keats, ​Letters

    "No man is an island entire of itself; every man is a piece of the continent, a part of the main . . . any man's death diminishes me, because I am involved in mankind. And therefore never send to know for whom the bell tolls -- it tolls for thee. " John Donne, Meditation XVII

  7. #97
    If it's a cliche don't use it because it's a cliche, if it isn't don't use it because no-one will understand WTF you are on about. Or, if it is and you don't mind cliches, dump it because it is in extremely poor taste.
    Shoot him down Snoopy!
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  8. #98
    Quote Originally Posted by clark View Post

    AZ:
    DAD: I miss your mother. SON: Keep practicing , Dad. It pulls a bit to the right.

    Stop jerking the trigger

  9. #99
    Quote Originally Posted by Hewlett View Post
    Profesh writers but on da forum 24/8.

    You can try to be subtle here. Or were you going for purposely hateful? Sometimes when I come across those kind of descriptions in stories, makes me wonder what the character would say about the author if they had a chance to come to life.
    Mmmm ...
    Craft / Draft / Graft And Write To Entertain Yourself And The reader.

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