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    Leanbh

    Leanbh

    Improbable, if not impossible.
    ...............Given, the poking/prodding/probing
    that you’ve under gone in the last, months.
    The pills, the inspections, not to mention
    injections to stop,
    .............the natural workings.

    Inconceivable, my mind so set
    against the idea has
    over time, evolved. The thought, no longer
    abhorrent, “no not for me,” but-
    .................................................. .....a sadness
    carried forward. We’d call her Aoife I decide,
    one night when counting sheep conjures only
    fingers and toes.

    Incomprehensible, still
    it is a subject unbreeched, at any length. A
    ghost conceived, only in my mind leanbh

    ​................................................. ...a lament.
    Last edited by 2020Syd2020; January 23rd, 2021 at 08:43 PM.

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    Wow! This is beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! I wouldn't change a thing.

    -AnnieJay

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    Quote Originally Posted by 2020Syd2020 View Post
    Leanbh

    Improbable, if not impossible.
    ...............Given, the poking/prodding/probing
    that you’ve under gone in the last, months.
    The pills, the inspections, not to mention
    injections to stop,
    .............the natural workings.

    Inconceivable, my mind so set
    against the idea has
    over time, evolved. The thought, no longer
    abhorrent, “no not for me,” but-
    .................................................. .....a sadness
    carried forward. We’d call her Aoife I decide,
    one night when counting sheep conjures only
    fingers and toes.

    Incomprehensible, still
    it is a subject unbreeched, at any length. A
    ghost conceived, only in my mind leanbh

    ​................................................. ...a lament.
    This is great, lovely words.

    J.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 2020Syd2020 View Post
    Leanbh

    Improbable, if not impossible.
    ...............Given, the poking/prodding/probing
    that you’ve under gone in the last, months.
    The pills, the inspections, not to mention
    injections to stop,
    .............the natural workings.

    Inconceivable, my mind so set
    against the idea has
    over time, evolved. The thought, no longer
    abhorrent, “no not for me,” but-
    .................................................. .....a sadness
    carried forward. We’d call her Aoife I decide,
    one night when counting sheep conjures only
    fingers and toes.

    Incomprehensible, still
    it is a subject unbreeched, at any length. A
    ghost conceived, only in my mind leanbh

    ​................................................. ...a lament.
    This is lovely!!! Really we do that. When we don't want them to come into existence, we find ways to stop them from their natural occurrence. Then their absence leading to sadness, we try conceiving in our minds, only feet and toes are entering imagination, for the feeling of ghost, really incomprehensible, why mind is behaving that way, as if it is turn of mind to play with us, scaring us, confusing us more with bizarre imagination.

    Really got into that feeling, but brought chills.
    Keep writing.
    Good luck
    Ritu

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